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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person Priss368
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! You\'ve got my attention with that first chapter! And a cliffy too! I can\'t wait to read everyone\'s reaction to WHO it is when they arrive. Poor Harry doesn\'t have any idea! I wonder where the veela blood comes from? Very well thought out! Pacing went just right. Reads smoothly with just the right amount of detail. I can\'t wait to see what you do with this next! Please update soon & not leave it for a long time! Priss
person elecktra
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!! I loved it! Your doing a great job! I can\'t wait to findout what happens next! So update soon!
person Death in a Pink Boa
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo-la-la
person Lady Yaoi
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For the love all that is D/H shipping and yaoi update this fic!
person Baka Basu
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! that was funny probaly wasnt suppose to be but oh well PLEASE continue i live it! :)
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh. I love it! Please continue.
person lacquer
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins*
interesting..... It\'s nice to see new plots of the veela variety.
I just love veela stories. Do continue and update often.... I do feel that this will get more interesting as it goes.
person acr
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Really interesting! I like the matchmaking party. However, why didn\'t Draco smell harry (we assume it\'s harry) when he ran into him? Anyway, please continue!

BTW, I *really* hope Harry doesn\'t just fall into Draco\'s arms. It\'s always more fun when he goes kicking and screaming.
person DarkQueen
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read more. Love veela stories.