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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person lacquer
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I forgot..... Wrong spelling, maybe a typo? Zabini, not Zabiny....
person ura
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story! Very original plot among very similar Veela stories!!! I cannot wait for the next update!
person danni
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am new to slash fanfiction and haven\'t read any harry-potter books so i dont even know what a veela is. My sister had this story up and now i am going to be a very faitful reader I hope you update this and soon it is very interesting
person zentiis
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it! i\'m sooooo anticipating many an amusing moment. The image of malfoy and the other purebloods sprinting off to the forest for the perfect mate *cough*harry*cough* was amusing indeed!
Great work! i really look forward to your next update ^_^
person fragonknight01
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant so far. Quite excited to read chapter 2 so please post soon.
person Anita
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Another sub!Harry story *bg* I love these kind of stories...especially if they are well written, which yours is. So keep on writing!
person makun
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no wonder you have so many reviews for only two chaps this story is amazing! i cannot wait for more oh i hope it will be soon. i cant wait to write a veela fic of my own too; different from yours of course lol. great work!
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great story! Please update soon! I love all the hot action. Everyone wants a piece of Harry\'s ass! (In fact, so do I! Man, if this guy were real, I would jump him so fast his head would spin!) Whoops, that\'s my alter ego talking there! (^-^)
Anyways, I love this story and Please Please Pleaseseee update soon!!!
person k
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, this really has potential, and I hope you update soon. It was a good idea to keep the pace up in this first chapter, as I think people will be hooked. I wonder how Harry will take it all, and please don\'t make him all meek and accepting! He could get a deal out of Lucius (spying) if he is to bond with Draco...
person elizabeth
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update faster.