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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person DarkQueen
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor harry. Not really. Kind of funny all the veela\'s went after him. Though he did put up a good fight. Can\'t wait to read more. Please update soon.
person Phorcys
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I really liked the chase the idea of seven veela guys fighting is interesting, some sort of pit arrangement would be nice to keep it in. I wish it had been longer. PLease keep updating your story is good.
person Alexa
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so promicing. And what it promices is a lot of fun!
I\'d love to see them fight, and the impression on Harry\'s face while they fight!
You write very well :-)
More! And SOON PLEASE!!!
person fragonknight01
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Yummy!
person Anon
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, quick, quick!! PLEASE!!!!!
person butterpie
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well bless my soul, you went and wrote another story. You sweet thing you. Veela stories, especially with Draco/Harry couplings is one of my favorite things to read. You really make my day. I like dominate Draco/submissive Harry. Keep it coming you\'re doing a fantastic job.
person Kalisin
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fun! please update soon!
person Phorcys
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start I like the twist on the Veela bonding plot, it\'s interesting. I hope you keep writting.
person anjelic
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very hot story! where did you come up with this idea?? very interesting but good. please update soon! I can\'t wait!
person amethyst
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intresting. i like the way you protraying the vella wizzarding customs and old laws.