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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeel* i\'m sooo excited!!!!!!! i want more!!! please update soon!!!!!! *dances*
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...it\'s very interesting so far...i can\'t wait for the next chapter
~MS
~MS
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo hoping to find the next chapter! Need chapter 2!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! Can\'t wait for more! And very original! I like that! It\'s very hard to find a good ORIGINAL veela fic these days. sigh...
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay.... where is it? *looks around author* where is the next chappie?!?!? *pokes author* i know you have it! now give it to me!! *pouts* please!?!
basically what i\'m saying is... GREAT START! UPDATE SOON!
basically what i\'m saying is... GREAT START! UPDATE SOON!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still fun!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeek!! More!! <3!!!!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two words...
YUMMY!!!! More!!!!!
YUMMY!!!! More!!!!!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story you\'ve started. I\'m anxious to see where it goes. Constructive Critisism: There are quite a few mispellings, past/present tense mix ups, grammatical errors and wrong words. I would get a beta to proof read before you post because these errors really detract from your story which is truly a shame.
Can\'t wait for the next chapter! Hope we get to see a fight between the dominants! ^_~
Can\'t wait for the next chapter! Hope we get to see a fight between the dominants! ^_~
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Sarryn offered to beta! Grab that offer up quick, friend, for sarryn is quite the artist with words!