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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like this story more with each word you write. I love the fight to prove Draco\'s worth. It was great. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter and the intro of Harry being Draco\'s mate to everybody else.
Great Job!
Great Job!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude i love you!
so good!
moooooooooooore!!!!
oh, you have a typo or two...i think you mean thigh when you said thight or something
keep up the good work!
love ning
so good!
moooooooooooore!!!!
oh, you have a typo or two...i think you mean thigh when you said thight or something
keep up the good work!
love ning
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like how you have their instincts take over as a way of explaining Harry\'s struggles and surrender. It makes it much better than jest reading about a feeble fight and then the \'lust\' becoming too much and giving in like a common whore. Excellent job. ^_^
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I\'m so happy you posted anther chapter. I was about to get off the net, but I though I\'d hit Refresh one more time, and then I see you have anther chapter. I was sooooo happy! And what a chapter it was. Luck Draco, I want Harry as mine to, maybe I\'m part Vella, or just really horny. Well, Keep Write....or else.
-Death in the Pink
-Death in the Pink
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S. I just want to tell you that nothing inspires use reviewers to keep reviewing like you letting us know you appricate it. Thank you for taking the time to mention use by name.
-Death in the Pink
-Death in the Pink
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*brightens your day* so i can\'t poke you to get another chappie, eh? well what can i do then? *begs* does begging work?? *grovels at authors feet* what about groveling?? *offers snacks as a reward for next chappie* promise of food?? *cries* what about tears?? *whine* whining?? *pout* how about i just pout until you update..... *sigh*
it\'s great!!! update soon!! and i hope that my review gave you a good laugh.. *giggle*
it\'s great!!! update soon!! and i hope that my review gave you a good laugh.. *giggle*
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Aww, poor Blaise. :p
I can\'t wait to see how this turns out.
I can\'t wait to see how this turns out.
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. LOL, i like ur story so far. Keep going on with this and please update soon. it\'s a cool new uptake on the Veela story line. It\'s different and definitely entertaining. Heh, well I\'ll be looking foward to what happens next so hurry and update !!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didnt know you wrote this on foreverfandom too i just saw it earlier a few minutes ago but i decided to come here again i hope its not done but you did say short so i dont know. this was great though and thanks for crediting me!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter....I liked that you didn\'t have Harry give up too easily. Only thing I noticed was that the word \"mate\" was used alot...not that it particularly matters or bothered me. It\'s just something i noticed in one of the paragraphs towards the end. Again very nice chapter!