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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person Wildfire
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm I get the feeling that the other mates arn\'t going to like it that Draco got Harry. Draco has to be able to protect Harry? that was an intersting part, is Harry going to be attacked by the other mates? Or was it jsut in general?

Wildfire
person janet
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my harry has been claimed!!!! I wonder how de other domi veela will react to this and hmmm what is the two father planning......
How will harry react to being claimed and how will his friends react....and how will draco treat harry.....
so many question that only u can answer them!!!

update soon
great chapter!!!
person sisko66002(sisko66002)
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish I had found this fic much sooner then I did. I shall be looking forward to more chapters.
person Echo
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love veela fics! This one is definitely interesting. Please update soon!
Btw, caught a few errors ... the one that stuck in my mind was in chpt 1 where \"costume\" should have been \"custom\"
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep! I\'m at ForeverFandom, TheSilverSnitch and here. The only three places I read! I adore this story! Was sooo excited to see another chapter! Hurry with chapter 4! Harry\'s scent changed? Because he\'s been mated or pregnant? Can\'t wait for more! Way to go Draco!
person amethyst
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am a bit sad to hear the story going to be short. it\'s very intresting. i am hoping maybe where will be a sequal. when did the weasleys stop being invited why did ron not mention harry\'s smell to him before? why does harry want a dominate?
person Phorcys
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww no naked Veela mud pit, but Draco Harry action is good also. So Harry is the sub and can become pregnant what could his reaction be. Great Chapter.
person K.c
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT ILOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!
person R
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is freakin awesome!! I love it so much, it\'s a totally new spin on the old veela hat!! Great job, I\'m definitely adding this to my favorites list!! Keep up the awesome work!
person Anyanka
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic and can