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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Keep posting and update soon!!!!!!!!

It would be differcult to say but it is discouraging to try an authors work, like it, look forward to it, and find the lack of conviction that I have found by time I get to the third chapter informing me that you find that you wont be continueing this story. I can only hope someone else picks up on this story that you have already got tired of working on. I can only as a reader look for an authors work and advoid it every time I see the name wondering what else you would tempt me with only to not leave me hanging after having gathered my interest. It doesnt make me have much hope to find that you have so many unfinished stories and cant wait to axe this one or that so that you can rush to another and show as much conviction and dedication to the story to what the fifth chapter or the sixth. Please dont get me wrong I appreciate that you want to partake in providing entertainment but would you go to a movie if they announced right up front that once your interest was involved in the movie that It would very likely not be finished.

I really like this story!!!! hrm i wonder what will happen to harry next............this was a highlight chapter!!! Gl on the next few chapters and keep up the good work1!!!!!!

Do update at least once a week or so, PLEASE!!! This plot is good and it would be such a shame for it to be postponed with the readers\' nerves on the edge of curiosity and anticipation.. Again I plead for you to continue this fic with at least once a week updates or so....

Whew! This is a great piece! Now how does one wait for more? I want to see more of the smug Malfoys on Harry & Draco\'s return.

Wonderful! I\'m enjoying the story a lot. I can\'t wait to read more! Keep up the good work. :)

I really enjoy the story but I\'m little confused, is everyone in the story part-veela and need to have a mate or only a select few. Was Harry right in his mind when he mated with Draco? Or was it their hormones in control? I thought it was alittle fast how they got in bed and ended up mating. Also is Harry really a submissive? And if he is, does that mean he can get pregnant? I\'m sorry if these are questions you all ready answered but I really want to know the answers.

I really enjoyed this story - I normally am quite put off by the Veela stories but this one has made me reconsider my stance - I really hope that at some point you do continue the plot as I\'d love to read more!

*leers at the mateing boys*
that was hot. so very hot *licks lips* i look forward to your next update ^_^