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One of the most pathetic Harrys I\'ve ever read.

P.S. Thanks for complimenting my name^_^

So.. is the 3rd chapter the last one or can we finagle one more chapter out of you??? I just want to know the reactions of the others to the mating...

Loved this latest chapter. I am bad aout feeding author\'s unless my review muses scream and they are screaming! Your flow is great. Chapter stories have a way of feeling \"interrupted\" but your chapters feel as though I\'m simply turning the page. And can I even say how I loved the fact that you had Harry make Draco \"prove\" himself!? Loved that he didn\'t just roll over like so many other author\'s have him do. Sometimes it\'s nice to read a completely submissive Harry, but it\'s been over done and done badly. I LOVE your \"mating\" scene. I hope your Harry has a little fire still left throughout this fic. Either way I LOVE it!

AWESOME story!!! please please please update soon!!! or when you can!!!!

Very good chapter! I liked several things about this chapter: 1. We saw the scene with what\'s going on with the parents. I wondered what would be happening with them while the \"participants\" are on their merry chase. 2. The mating scene was well paced, well written. I liked that Harry challenged Draco to prove that he was worthy (This works in real life too. I don\'t know of any woman who likes a weak man.) & played hard to get. I can\'t wait to see the next morning! Please update soon! Priss

Eek! A Potter and a Malfoy. What a match that shall be. I can only imagine the terror they shall cause in the community.

great story!!! love it very much

DAaaaahhh :o) Awesome :D:D I can\'t wait for you to update wow, I always loved those draco/veela fics this one is really great, I love the fact that for once, Ron isn\'t the dumb one who doesn\'t know anything...as for the submissive being conquered, great idea ^.^

Aww - yay! GO DRACO! Can\'t wait till next chapter when EVRYONE hears! *gasps and faints like pansy*