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OmG I love this story ....i cant wait to read what gonna happen next will harry be in denial ? I hope u update soon u haven\'t in awhile im getting impatient lol

Oh my god I love this. More more I want more

What a wonderful story! I love veela Draco/Harry fics and yours is one of the best. I loved how you portrayed the Malfoys, the whole chase and catch, the entire story was perfectly written. Such a sweet, tender, passionate romantic fic. Thankyou for sharing, I\'d love you to write more chapters. It would be great to see the school\'s reaction and how Harry/Draco\'s relationship pans out plus Pansy has got to be stopped!

What a great fic! I love all the wonderful things you have created for the veela mating - the rituals, Draco fighting harry to show he is stonger, the bite, the sex was great, and just so much I can\'t write it all! Looking forward to more!

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I like it very much! Lots of unexpected events...keep going! Thanks, Pete

just amazed how many reviews you have gotten on this story so far. I begin to see that giving you reviews arent really that helpful anyway when you dont seem to listen to what the readers are trying to tell you. You have a hit here and Im sure that other authors would just love to have thought of a story that got this many reviews and would have probably made this a priority write against other stories just because they could see that this one is right on the money as to what the readers are looking for which is a unique story form. I think its great to try to tell the authors fluff to boast their egos but I sure wish your other readers would get it clear that you arent committed to this story and in your own words have shown little interests in this story by the time you got to the third chapter, just when things were beginning to happen in the story. I hope you dont feel like I enjoy giving you negative words but in this world i have found that to be committed to a thing makes a timely update, happy readers and a author who knows where she is from moment to moment and not taking on too many things to the point that nothing is really getting accomplished.

I can only hope that perhaps another more dedicated writer will take over this wonderful plot and really give us some real writing with some dedication and some regular updates.

this is really really good and i can\'t wait for the next chapter

Mwahaha! Ron not flipping out? This must be the end of the world. ;) Quite cute.