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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person gd
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update update
person Serpenteyes
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... Most authors have Harry as the dominant one in Harry/Draco veela fic, but I like your writing. Can\'t wait for the smut to happen! ^___^
person oneeyejane
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and have know problems with it. But i do have a problem with is the way yo ended Heir of light, Heir of darkness. You sayed that you were going to have a Sex part and we only saw a part before you ended it. i think it could have been longer and a i think that you sould work on your sex parts. At least for that story.

And plesae go back and do somthing with that story if you can so this Veela story you can finsh the heir story and do it right. i\'m not yelling at you i just do not like to get into a story a have it be a let down.

With love for your writhing BYe.

P.S. i love this story so for don\'t let this be a let down to.
person tessa3
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands* allright.. explaniations.. i am all done for Harry.. *whispers to Harry* i know how you feel being lost in this jiggy jiggy jungle... anyhoo... Draco knows how to make an entrance No??? *giggles* awwwww.. if the fic was going to be short that woudl have been fine by me.. it woudl have been nice though.. but if you going to make it longer.. ROCK ON!!!!
person Missi
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Jane-Lily
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(cough) this is... can\'t explain just continue, I beg you!
person Demon
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good and thanks for the long chapter i can\'t wait for the next chapter
person Kitty
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I can almost feel the tension building! Well, Harry did say he would fight Draco every step of the way didn\'t he? Now this is he chance. Poor Draco, he doesn\'t know what he\'s let himself in for!

P.s. One chap a week?! That\'s great! better than the other works I\'m reading. I\'m now gonna get a regular supply of Draco/Harry love! *does happy little jig*
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I can\'t wait for chapter 7! I can wait for next week! Oh wow! Why are the other doms still trying to interact with Harry? They might want to up the wedding.
person Brittany
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha, poor harry he just can\'t get an privacy can he? I couldn\'t help but laugh at Draco\'s \"so, where do we sign up?\" bit lol any way update soon!!!!!!!!!!