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I almost passed over this story, it being a Veela based fic, I rolled my eyes and thought, \' great, another Draco veela fic where Harry doesn\'t get a say in what happens to him when the veela(s) come sniffing around. Gotta love those sorta, could be non con parts that really turn me off and piss me off. \' Of course when Draco gave Harry a chance, I rejoyced! Plus I loved how Harry flew off before the adults and Dumble-muble could dictact what they wanted Harry to do when it can to the choosing a mate. Really, in almost every veela based Draco/Harry fic there is, here or otherwise, there\'s always something that happens that pisses me off. LIke Harry doesn\'t get a choice, he\'s guilted into doing what everyone else wants, or it\'s a would be non-con scene between our two sexy staring young men is mostly what I\'m talking about. Luckily I think you\'ve done a great job of not following in the path of those before you. I like how Draco gently seduces Harry, a first I believe! (I\'m so gonna get flamed for this review by everyone else who likes those other veela based fics) F*CK THAT! It\'s how I feel! I\'m not saying they aren\'t wonderfully written, but when some fall into the cookie cutter formula, it can really hurt a great story. So good luck with your unique veela based fic.

you were actually really close to what we call the shirt, we call them boat necks, but usually only females wear them, i love your story though

I am really enjoying this story. I like the treatment you are giving the Veela Society. Its different. Keep writing.

Huhuhu isso esta ficando mais e mais interessante, heim.^_^ Mal posso esperar pelo proximo capitulo, faz ele bem comprido e de preferencia com algum lemon? Update soon, please.

hey! update!update! update! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssse! really good story. very creative! please update soon! *dances* please. i give u candy!

I like Draco when he\'s being all protective and possesive. It\'s funny. ^_^ I cannot wait for an update. (Would it be too much to beg to get an e-mail when you do update? Pwease...:D:D) I think what I like the most is that Harry isn\'t expected to be submissive in the traditional sense of the word. He is expected to bear children (and the things that come along with that) He gets to keep his identity which is what I was sorely missing from another story (with a similar idea, but I think I like this one much better if only for the way everything is executed). So when\'s the next update? :p ^_^

-Blackcat9
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I love this story so much, and I keep waiting for the next chapter, checking like 5 times a night, please write more soon!!!

Although...one comment is that harry to a point seems out of character in chapter six because of how he announces everything...I think it would be more realistic if someone asked questions focing answers from harry infront of everyone!!

I wanna see what shall happen, update soon please!!

wow...i am hooked on this fic, when i first started reading it, you said it was going to be a short story...so i was extremely happy when you said you had a longer plot! yay!! anyways love the fic and hope you update soon!

I LOVE THIS STORY. DRACO AND HARRY ARE SO GOOD TOGETHER. PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE THIS STORY. I HOPE IT\'S SOON. THANKS

You know, Neville/Blaise is a pretty cool pairing, is there anyway you could do that pairing, please? Like Neville was gone or his family has learned how to hide thier scent? Just a suggestion. This fic rocks!!!!