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OMG!!!! Where is the next chapter?? It has been ages!!! I want to know what happens to Blaise and if he is going to put the moves on Harry. How will Draco react? Well...I can imagine how he will react...oooooooo please please write another chapter for me...pretty please with sugar and other goodies on top.

I like this story, a lot. I haven\'t read a story with this type of veela plot line before. It\'s very intricate, very lovely. But I must say that it\'s a bit hard to read. I understand that English is not your best language, and I think you\'re doing a wonderful job with it. I wish that I could speak another language with that much flair. Might I suggest that you aquire another beta? Perhaps myself? I\'ve been a beta for many stories, and I even have some of my own! I would be more than glad to take the job. I really do like this story. Keep up the good work :)

-Stephanie

you write that you will update everyweek, i\'m still waiting after chacking tje web everyday at list once.
are you going to update soon????????

This is really good, i love how different your veiw is on the veela society, very original. Oh and i dont know about anywhere else, but in Australia we call that canoe thingy an \"off the shoulder top\" Love your story and i can\'t wait to see some more Harry/Draco action!

could you somehow work the prophecy in to Harry\'s favor. Like maybe they arranged the marriage to take place after Voldie bites the dust and since Harry assumes that he won\'t make it is fine with it. That would be one way of getting out of this.

I have to say that I am intrigued by your story. I do hope that Harry keeps giving Draco a hard time. maybe he could come up with ways to try and make himself unattractive to him (he could act submissive like Narcissa said Draco wouldn\'t like) and just be plain ole stubborn. I hope to see a bit of a fight between the two before he totally gives in.

absolutely wonderful! i love it. the grammer and writing technique is alright and the story plot is just wonderful! update soon please.

Oh, god, THANK YOU for not making Mrs. Malfoy an interferring BITCH!! THANK YOU THANK YOU! Sadly, that was a factor that turned me off from a rather good veela based Harry/Draco fic, besides the whole \'Draco almost rapping his mate\' part. I loved the chapter where Mrs. Malfoy calmly and quiet wonderfully informed Harry of the whats-whats of the veela world, answered his questions, put some of his fears to ease, and such. Wonderfully done. I enjoy this side of Mrs. Malfoy not often seen enough and it does make her a great character to enjoy. I hope I can read a furture chapter where the equally sexy Sr. Malfoy helps out Harry put some fears to rest about his son and what\'s to be expected of him as a veela\'s mate. ^_^

Woe great chapter.. poor Harry LOL :D more soon cya xxx

it\'s boat neck


great story!