rate_review Reviews

I love this story sooo much. I really enjoy how draco is dominant without making harry looking weak. I also love the engagement season idea, it\'s very original.

Great story. Continue soon!!!

um...hellooooo....are you there? well i wanted to say that i really love your story and i have been waiting for an update forever because i really REALLY love your story!!!
and i am just checking to make sure you aren\'t dead or have just forgotten this story that i REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE!!!!!!!
so if you are still alive please update as soon as you possibly can! and if you just forgot about this story then please update as soon as posssible!!!
and if you are dead and are in the notherworld, please update as soon as possible!! or if you almost died and now are in a coma please re read this
story that i REALLY REALLLY REALLY REALLLY LOVE and update as soon as possible!!!!!!
UPDATE PLEASE!!!!
LOVE HUGS AND KISSES AND A BUNCH OF RED ROSES IF YOUR DEAD OR IN A COMA,
NICKNACK

ps: i reallly reallly really really love this story!!!

^__^ its so good!

love this fic. LV is not goinf to be pleased. update soon.

hello! it\'s been two minutes since my last review! have you updated yet?!?!?!?!!?!? if your out of ideas and that is why you aren\'t updateing then here\'s an idea that you can use or work off of or use for inspiration or ignore or yell at or destroy or laugh at....anything would be nice so long as you update as soon as possible! ok here it is: so harry is the golden apple and everyone seems to want him...*dramatic pause*...so some random dominant is a little too forcefull or demanding in his greedy ness....um.... then it\'s like the straw that broke the hippogrifs back! now all of the envyous dominants are after harry!!! this is the part when all hell breaks loose and every one trys to get at poor harry while trying to kill eachother!!!! you can be as gorry as you like!!! then draco shows up...*rightous anger!*....and he makes his way twords his mate, throwing the pathetic doms out of his way and punching and kickind and all out beating anyone who gets in his way!!!!!.....*\"HE\'S MINE\"*.....finally draco makes it to his very flustered and a little beat up harry!!! but the other doms are too far gone! greed has taken over reason and instinct! they attack draco! and thus goes a battle in which draco defeats every single dom that tryed to take his mate! ....the battle ends when the last dom hits the ground....draco has proven himself worthy of being harrys mate not only by defeating harry but also defeating every single dom that tryed to steal him...a couple hundred ....ha ha ha ha!!! or something like that!
if you dont like how it began it could start out like this: harry is arguing with draco and hits or pushes away from draco in front of other doms.....and thinking that draco hasn\'t earned or controlled his mate they try and get harry in this supposed weakness...i kind of like this one better....hmmmmm..... anyways you dont have to use this at all... its just here if you need it....have you updated yet?!?!?!?!?!

Please update soon. I\'ve been waiting so long for the next chapters.

I love this story and have been following it for awhile. I hope that you can update it soon, because I have been waiting for a long time for a new chapter. I love the dominant Draco(veela) and submissive Harry stories. Especially when Harry gets pregnant. I really enjoy your story and I hope you have the time to update it soon.
Thanks for the story!
-Silver\'s Emerald

I just finnished reading all 6 chapter\'s
and I just love how Draco get\'s Harry from
all the other Veela. I will be glad when you
up date this fic because it is great.

ps could you please let me know when you up date
orfinnish this story at sweetteetwo@yahoo.com.

*waves* ello... love the fic.. dont leave us hangin, shug!!!! *dances away*