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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mas Mas Mas! I really like creature fics, but Draco/Harry is usually not my thing. (Harry/Snape ;p) But I really enjoy this story! Update soon! <3
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fic , please update soon
and i really like the idea of Black, Snape and the Malfoys forming a "revenge group" agains the Dursleys, I'm sure they can think oh something truly horrible (for eg, transfiguring the whole family into some magical beast and leaving them in Hagrid's care...)
and i can't wait for the ceremony between Harry and Draco...
person MrsFWolf
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story but I'd love to see Harry pay back the dursleys for what they did to him. I can't wait to read more.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please! Soon! AND WHY THE FUCK DID THIS NOT UPDATE TO THE TOP OF THE LIST. This is a real problem with AFF.net. I just found it cause I decided to check one of my favorite unfinished stories and see if maybe there was an update. I love this story, it got me writing in the first place.
person Ruffner
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaahhhhh. a streak of sunlight through a bleak and cloudy day. That is what this feeling is. but yet... I feel this overwhelming desire for MORE! And please, do not make us loyal fans wait so veeerrryyy long. I believe we almost died of starvation this last time. It was so very painful, do you see? So, please, bask in the briliance of a job well done then start writting again.

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person SParker
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is my second time 'reading' this story...and I have to admit you definitely
did good giving us a new spin on the whole Veela mating scenario.

Things I like about it...Harry MAINTAINS his independence AND backbone [..sick of wimpy, dependent Harry in creature fics..], Ron is portrayed as someone with good sense for a change AND we see his years as a pureblood isn't a total waste and Draco
is still Draco, but mature like an adult now.

What REALLY brings me back to this story...my favorite scenes:

First, the whole 'first-come-first-serve' chase in the beginning...THAT was
different, with a whole Veela community in attendance. Plus, Ron's knowledge
was a refreshing change.

Second, #16: 'Harry-hides-from-the-Dominates'...this scene here, Harry wants 'to leave his hiding place and present himself in the clearing in front of the tent, to show himself off in his pretty new robe. I thought that was funny! :-)

...and this scene here, the tender 'mate to mate' moment...when Draco found Harry in the tree.

Well, that's it for now, but I get a feeling you're going to give me ANOTHER
good scene when Black, Snape & the Malfoys confront the Dursleys.


nuff said...
person Ecks
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY Another chapter! This is getting so good! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter! Interesting, Snape and Sirius working together??? This could be really bad. But will it be bad for them or the Dursleys? I hope it's bad for the Dursleys.
person toads70
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter, can't wait for the next!!
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you Sakya T_T and this story and i'm so0o0o0o glad your stories are never abandoned
-hugs this one lots- its prob my fav

Eros