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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person momoko
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story, bye
person BLACK*PLAGUE
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, keep it up I like this Veela fic. Please update soon
person Yana
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee hee poor Draco
person Yana
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool chappy
i loved it
person Yana
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whens the wedding
person Shtoofi
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter, I'm glad that you finally updated... I must say that I am very much looking forward to the dancing lessons, and to a lot more Harry/Draco action as that is just so much fun to read. I love that this story has a refreshing twist, and I can't wait for more!!!
person Banner
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is fun!
I'm really enjoying Harry's confusion and the way Draco's changed to suit his mate.
The only problem is, how will Harry defeat the Dark Lord when he's pregnant? Or when he has to care for a toddler. Trust me, being a mother is a far-more-than-full-time job for several years. There's a reason that women traditionally aren't soldiers, and did not accompany their men to war. Modern women can prevent an inconvenient pregnancy - it doesn't have to negate all her plans for the rest of her life. It sounds as if Harry is going to be pregnant as soon as he graduates this year. I guess he's no longer the One Who Might Defeat Voldemort.
Is Neville actually going to be the Chosen One now?
person avihenda
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another chapter! great! looking forward to draco and harry dancing :-)
person Rosencoff
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is such an awsome story. It just kinda sucks that there are only 8 chapters. ;.; I was so into it and then like.. it stopped. XD Haha, I hope Pasy doesn't do anything too stupid. I mean, the doms can get away with stuff, but I don't think the subs can. Or am I wrong? o.o; Haha, I might have missed that part. Anyways, I'll be obnoxiously waiting for the next update!
person Storm
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update. Great job! I especially liked how everyone caught onto Draco's little ploy of Harry spending time with him except for Harry. And I LOVED Molly and Arthur's response to the news. Can't wait for more.