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March 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
\'Severus\' - not \'Serverus\'
\'dining room\' - not \'dinning room\'
But as a story, this is very well done. A beta with good English skills could help, but I am hoping that there will be another installment of your story, soon.
\'dining room\' - not \'dinning room\'
But as a story, this is very well done. A beta with good English skills could help, but I am hoping that there will be another installment of your story, soon.
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for telling me that you update and what a wonderfull chapter ! I loved it, but it's so sad that you update not so much !! Your story is really appreciated ! Well i think that all of us, you too have a life lol !
Well juste to say that your chapter was really good, even for french like me, i understand very well !! This story is one of the best on veela you should know that and i have read a lot french and english one !! I hope you will continue on this way or better (but i don't think it's possible !!) !
Thank you !
Tobby
Well juste to say that your chapter was really good, even for french like me, i understand very well !! This story is one of the best on veela you should know that and i have read a lot french and english one !! I hope you will continue on this way or better (but i don't think it's possible !!) !
Thank you !
Tobby
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The fic is wonderful. I love mating fics.
Are you going to continue it? If so, please notify me when you next update!
Thank you for the story!!
--gndmlvr01
Are you going to continue it? If so, please notify me when you next update!
Thank you for the story!!
--gndmlvr01
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The fic is wonderful. I love mating fics.
Are you going to continue it? If so, please notify me when you next update!
Thank you for the story!!
--gndmlvr01
Are you going to continue it? If so, please notify me when you next update!
Thank you for the story!!
--gndmlvr01
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where is the rest of this fic, HMMMMMMM? I know I must say that a lot, but it is because I really enjoyed this story and WANT MORE NOW DAMMIT!!!! :)
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is absolutly amazing! The plot is truly orignal! I read veela and other magical creature stories more than anyone I know, I'm a bit addicted actully, and I've never read such an original plot! I would greatly appriciatr it if you could send me a mail when you update:) This site really needs too get an alertsystem!
/Mimmi
/Mimmi
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story I look forward to more updates. I do hope that Harry will put his foot down when Molly shows up and makes sure she stays in charge of being his "shadow" and not let Malfoy have everything his way by letting his cousin take charge. Can't have Draco think he is going to get his way all the time. Harry really needs to take time and learn about things. Anyway keep writing and when you can post again I look forward to the next chapters. Thx for posting!!!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh , I like the malfoys in this story , ^^ this's just wonderful , update soon , neh LOL
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Pansy is so delusional if she thinks she would marry Draco without Harry around, As if Narcissa would allow it!
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that Pansy is going to be humiliated! I so want that! Stupid evil slut bitch, scheming against my Harry! Anyway, I am SO excited to see another update so soon! Thank you so much for this amazing update, I look forward to the next one! Oh, and were the elder Malfoy's happy that Molly's going to be the chaperone?