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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person Jan
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, a very creative story indeed can't wait to see what will happen next. Will Harry go along with the maze hunt? or will he demand to stay with Draco?hmm! Gods I could picture Draco going crazy already. Please update soon.^_^
person kuzzzmanya
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Get this story betaed. Your grammar is getting worse and worse, and it is no longer fun to read this fic
person DBZfanalways
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I actually found this tory on fanfiction.net but you said you left some parts out and it may seem odd so I came here and found it. I love this story it is one of the best I've read. I can't beleive that they are going to let those crazed doms try again for him. I sure do hope Draco wins. Please update again as soon as you get the chance.
person Shardae
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shit I would be pissed if somebody wuz tryin to claim my mate too...Add soon.... I want to see what happens next....
person yoblossom
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
draco had better be sure to win Harry as his mate again. -.- I give you my frowny face. the council is retarded to think that.


^_^ Please update soon!
person arealdeal
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
evil, evil cliffie!! Just read all chapters and really like this so far. please update as quickly as possible, my patience is right in line with Draco's. Glad Pansy got what was coming to her, but all things considered she was just a pawn, but it is a shame to pass on those genes.
person SLQ
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Couldn't Harry's blood also be tested for signs of the confundus charm? Wouldn't that prove that he trusted Draco, did not leave of his own free will, and avoid the maze? Please? PLEASE? This is the second review I've left on this chapter, the other's at Fanfiction.net, please update soon and you're doing a wonderful job of maintaining the suspense. Thanks!
person Fiona
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! Glad they found Harry safely! But now things are just about to get even more excited!
Can't wait to read more, keep up the lovely work! =)
person zer0
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so0o0o good, new chapters of your fic make my day, please keep going on like this!.
person Amessis
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stupid councils! Draco will still get him back, right?