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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person invalid
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG what the hell is everyone thinking? If they know it Harry's trip to the forest has no validity then how can such a ruling stick? Just becuase he is high quality meat? That fact is their ruling has no truth and they are underminding their own system. all their traditions and etiquette has just become invalid.
person huh
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I also think it is a bit cruel to put a submissive through the maze again because he has already been claimed and it was a fully valid claim so how are they going to balance this new claim in their mind? just for the entertaiment of the council? there goes veelian civilization
person Hitori101
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More soon please!! Quick Quick Quick!!! PLEASE!!! And kinda work on spelling, grammar, and conjugations...
person Jessica
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More? Please? And an email when you post? If you get a chance. Thanks. It's amazing so far, btw. :)
person ochibi-chan
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one problem out of the way and another pops up! awww, poor draco and harry, they can't just simply live happily ever after can they? can't wait to read more!
person Keitachan
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am not a big Harry Potter fan but I really enjoy this story. It is well written, flows well and is descriptive without being verbose.
You manage to spark the readers imagination and bring the story to life.
I do have one criticism however, write faster. Lol. I cannot wait to see what you think of next.
Well done and congratulations on an vey good manuscript
person Anyanka
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHG!!! poor Harry, poor Draco, poor ME!! I need to read more^^
BTW, one of my favourites stories by far
person Kim
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You updated so soon! THANK YOU!! Great Chapter...glad to see that Parkinson is finally off with Ivanoff. Hmm...a new chance to enter the maze for Harry. That will be interesting to wait and see if he decides to enter or not.
person Spikerix
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! And don't worry about getting it beta-ed, you did great, no complains!
person vibora
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! and i thought it was bad before! :) update soon! stupid council!