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by Sakya

person I concure
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If the maze must happen, I hope Draco wins and/or I hope Harry gets so angry and fed up that his Super-Harry Potter Powers-that-we-all-know-not kick in and he blasts all (but his love Draco) right out of the Wizarding World.

It would ALSO serve the council right if some innocent dominate boy (not DM or HP obviously) was killed during this maze scandal. This ruling is very much in the wrong and I agree that it greatly mocks the built up civilized behavior and conduct that they are all so proud of. The very act of the Council ruling to do something as vile as 'ignoring' Draco and Harry's bond or claim as if it means nothing just because they WANT to is disgusting. The council themselves might as well be Mickael Ivanhoff and Pansy teamed up to make their dreams come true to the great shame and heart breaking cost of their society and innocents.
person ruling rocks right
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and the Malfoy's cowering out and drugging up their son Draco to prevent him for protecting what IS rightfully his is also quite disgusting. The bond or claim wasn't made between the council and Harry. It was made between Draco and Harry. Maybe we all should let out political representators come in our homes and have their way with whom and whatever simply because it would amuse them or create a baby with 'powerful' blood. Yes, it would be right of our parents to drug us and keep us from protecting our loved ones to palacate the the ones really abusing their authority. We're all for it, right?
person JIN
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE YOUR STORY.UPDATE SOON
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH I sooo need chapter 15!
person HitoriGIRL
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE More sooon!!! Chapter 15 NOW!!!
person ren
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story please keep writing i need to know what happens next
person Agnieszka
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I decided to read your story because I loved Frizzy idea about Veela-Draco. Your story, however, is completely different. It managed to capture my attention from the first words and surprise me at every turn. Your story is full of humor and romance and is simply great! I certainly hope you write more soon!
person madlodger
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY THANKSGIVING
I know that you are not from US, Thanksgiving is a family holiday when people get together and eat a lot of turkey meat!
I've been reading your stories since finding one on Fanfiction.net, I believe. Sorry for not reviewing, long time lurking habits. You are a gifted writer. Your story 'Heir of light, Heir of darkness' is one of my all times favorites and I've read it more than ones. It was so cleverly done:D

'Veela Inheritance Problems' is close to becoming one of favorite ones also.

Thank you for writing.
person rachel
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have got to write more!
person doesitmatter
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing.
i need more so update soon.