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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person kira_kat
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!

'tis very frustrating...
person Sacharissa S.
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
person story lover 101
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story can't wait till it is updated!
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please update soon I have to see what's going to happen next!!!
person kat
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
happy new year and when are you going to write more.
come on new year new story
person DragZ
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeee

Please tell me your gonna finish this .. I am all worked up and need a release

Pritty please .. with cookies and cherries ontop

DragZ
person Oderint dum metuant
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted you to know that I adore this story! It is HOT! DMHP is one of my favorit pairings and this is one of my favorit stories. I really hope you continue to update as the loss of this story would be tragic. I think some public/simply not caring that they can be seen sex upon reuniting might be hot!
person Nikki
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...okay...you know what...i am going ot go insane if you dont add more to this!!! WE NEEEEEEEEEED MORE!! OMG WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?? OH POOR DRACO!!
person and the beat goes on
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and another thing... ^_^; I check up on this fic quite often and get a bit heated everytime so what better way to pass the time than to add a little more...ne.

Was just thinking that yeah it would serve right if someone died. (Althoughm, frankly I hope the maze doesn't happen at all) Think about it. The council who are sitting 'safely' behind their council desks have just ruled unjustly and need to be taught a life lesson. It is so wrong to put innocent young dominates into a quite volitial situation just to entertain their imaginations as to 'Oh, what could be...la di dah.'

Why is it so volitial? Perhaps because Draco will be there and I'd imagine out for the blood of anyone who comes close to his Harry. And then there is Harry, who I am hoping will eventually be who he is and get mad, ready to draw blood just because this whole, "Hey Ho, you're a veela, didn't cha know?" situation has it coming. And then there are these veela boys are going into such an tense situation without a clue. Dangerous? I think so. Cause not only are Draco and Harry supposedly powerful in their own rights, but now they have a hightened purpose which will be fueled by a veela instinct and temper during the whole cirucs.

Sure the veela instinct will kick in for all the dominates Blaise and Draco included. But those dominates don't have an emotional humanistic force like LOVE to push them find the strength however so to gain victory, to desperate rages that enhilate all obstacles, to win, etc... People often mention how loved ones can do amazing feats when in need to help another. (I think this situation could count as one of those times.) But the last factor that pretty much confirms danger would be the whole veela instinct/animalistic thang.

Even in chapter two, during the first Harry hunt, the parents opted to stay out cause the young dominates were 'beyond' their reach (without using magical force I suppose). And none there had a hightened sense of Love (DM excluded for my own hope) or purpose, pushing them to win, to ensure that they win by taking anyone else out. How much more dangerous does it get?

All of that is just to make the point that I think the Council derserves to be skinned for putting innocents submissives and dominates alike into a needlessly very dangerous situation without any grounds. Oh, and what if Voldemort decides to take the opportunity to infiltrate the maze and kill off Harry that way? Harry and many other folk would be vulnerable...stands to reason.

Strange. It almost seems that Pansy had more grounds than the Council does. At least she had been promised the hand of Draco and though no matter how delusion (and apparently subjective)that word was at least she had the word of that arrangement/of her parents to stand on. The Council has nothing but their very empty desire to be entertained. There are no rules or grounds to stand on for ordering a perfectly good bond void so they can entertain their dreams of different Harry Love Boats and all the kind of veela babies one could make with this match or that.

Civilized vs. Uncivilized while trying not to inhibit a person's instinctive nature and at the same time uphold social rules, moral, ethics, among a people/situation where things could very easily go wrong. Hmmm, I suppose the Council pissing on the back bone of the rules that they are supposed be upholding isn't the way to maintain a civilized situation.
That whole last paragraph wasn't exactly what I wanted to say, but it is dancing around it. Suppose the heat of the argument has been tamed (not like RIKI...that fan fic commercial is like trying to bash it existance over my head or something. Yeah I see u.)

here we go round the mulberry bush waiting for updates in the morning
person Echo
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update. Great chapter. I've been waiting for this. :} But now I'll have to wait to find out Draco's reaction and what will happen to Harry. :{ Please update soon.