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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person Vittani
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD THAT WAS FANTASTIC, BUT YOU ARE SO EVIL... EVIL...Evil... You have got toupdate this soon. I need to know what Harry will do. they are idiots if they didnt think harry would fight for his dom. I want to know who dominant is, please let it be one of the ones who made him go through that again. He is so smart. confusing them like that. Please update. I am actually begging...
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You get him Harry! Or Draco! lol I just love this story! Update soon please!
person AngelStarFire
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha.... Thank you so much for updating! This is one of my favorite stories, and I've been anxious for an update. ^__^ Two chapters is more than I could hope for at once, so thank you! *hugs*

I loved these two chapters... Poor Harry... that robe must have been driving him absolutely mad. ^^ I'm glad Draco was still coherent enough during the chase to figure it out, as well... I remember in the first chase they were pretty much 'wild'. I can't wait to see how the next chapter pans out! :D

Happy writing!
person Jan
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LOVE THIS FICTION! Please update soon, need more must have more.^__^
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaay! Finally another chapter! I'm sooo happyyy! Good work on this one! I can't wait for more!
person NightLo
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...but there still maybe more dominants around and share the fight (if my maths is correct - 14 is left, so 13 is still there with only one shows up)...so even Harry joins the fight for HIS dominant - the best way to end this once and forever is...getting Harry's pregnant!

BTW, I forgot to mention last time that apart from the renew search - now the Malfoys are out as spies - there is no other way but to make sure Draco wins in the search for their own lives! And why does Harry act like this? Haven't you mentioned that submissive usually let the dominant for fighting?
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh it's been so long and only two chapters!!! NOOOOOOOOOO please write more i love this story and i was so happy to see that you updated!!! please update again soon!!!
person Eden
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bitch!!! That's cruel, evil, despicable cliffie ToT! More!!!
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 17! Why did his eyes go solid green? Is he with child?
person LoveGD
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Oh, please, please, please tell me that Draco will ba able to claim Harry again??
Awesome chapter, btw, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
//LoveGD