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for Veela Inheritance Problems

by Sakya

person Vittani
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey fantastic chapter. Knew Draco could do it. N Harry's resistance was fantastic. Please update again soon. Wanna know what they are gonna do to the Dursleys.
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Draco and Harry kick all their arses and all the other Dominants run screaming from the enclosure, cyring like infants.
person Vittani
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh you are evil why'd you have to take my baseball bat away. Lol. I hope your beta's quick cos i really need an update. Please.
person MrGalion
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome.
Can't Wait for more.
Update soon and post that chapter 18.
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

GAHHHH.... *implodes* I was so happy to see an update, and then it left off in such a terrible place! You've got to get 18 up faster!
person Jan
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How could you do this; I was hoping to see the fight but no, you came into the explanation of how Harry came to be and back to when Draco found Harry. Poor Jean he doesn't have a chance. Oh Please, please update soon.
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm MELTING... MELTING.. MELTING IN MY TEARS!!!!!! Oh, What a world, what a world..

Great story, Awesome storyline, Great take on chars and giving Harry FAMILY.. ACTUACAL FAMILY!!

;.; EVIL, EVIL CLIFFIE!!

Update fast or I'll Drown!
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please oh please oh please write more soon you can't leave it there. I am begging sitting on the edge of my seat and late for work more more more.
person NightLo
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...that little dominant (sorry, I cannot even remember his name) is too confident - how can he sure that he can catch Harry? If he is no match of Draco and his cousin, he is also no match for Harry - by all means as a submissive who starts a fight!
person Selera
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get the next chapter up soon.