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for New Beginning... A Chance for Love

by ShilohDarke

person JTBJAB
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellant! You update so quickly too...please continue in this way as i am longing for the next chapter!
person June
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - very cute, the picture of the horses forming a posse to plan their escape! I wonder if horse-Hagrid is big enough for Hagrid to ride. Nice of Hermione\'s friend to stop by - did Hermione tell her about Severus too, or only Lupin? Thanks for updating.
person Susan
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice imagery in this chapter. I love Hermione\'s dealings with her horses. Such beautiful animals it seems so natural that she would have a draw to those creatures. I enjoyed the introduction to her friend as well. I definitely smell a relationship with her and Remus! Thanks so much for the update
person Patatita
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s getting more and more interesting every time. Now the new characters that you add to your story-line are great! I can\'t wait for Lupin and the stranger to interact. It\'s coming very nicely! Great job!!
person Susan
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. Severus is not a total wuss, but still manages to be sympathetic and caring. I love how he is taking an interest in what Hermione has been doing...she kept a hand in magic without actually doing the magic. Really wonderful and you keep surprising me. Thank you so much!
person jongirl
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories that i have ever read. I really enjoyed how you intergrated the American and british cultures. Please update soon!
person eve/roarke
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic four chapters, I thought the story line was perfect.
I look forward to the next update. Thank you for a great fanfic.
person anya
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply lovely.
person JTBJAB
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, please update soon! This chapter was brilliant!
person Sabrina
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work. Please update asap.