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Well, its an amazing Story ^^
Go on, with it

^^

i love this story and i hope you keep going with is i would love to know if dark feather and lupin will get together sooo please dont let the bad reader make you stop i just love this story and please i beg of you to update this story soon please .... well in till next time later

angle

Hmmm, I think a few more chapters would be inorder. We have to know what happens next, don\'t we? (eyebrows wiggle encouragingly)

About your comment on only getting negative feedback once the story was betaed... I think that sometimes people won\'t even bother to leave a review if something doesn\'t appeal to them at all, but if they think something is good and they think it could almost be excellent they will fixate on whatever they think the problem is. I don\'t know whether that is what is happening here, as I haven\'t read the reviews, but it is worth bearing in mind that pretty good stories get negative feedback too.

Nice story BTW

Just found this one again and ya know what? I think it\'s a sweet story!
Lots of folks just aren\'t happy unless they\'re picking other folks\' stuff apart. I\'ve seen too much of that to not have noticed it. But honestly, I loved the story. Personally, I would like to see more of \"what happens next\" with Remus and Dark Feather, but that\'s up to you since it\'s your story ^__^
One of my favorite lines, to those that have the ability to tell stories (because I don\'t), is don\'t let someone else tell you what\'s right or wrong. If you get some advice and see where it might be beneficial, that\'s one thing, but nit-pickin\' over how tall a horse should be in a FAN-FIC??? The bloody thing could be 30 or 40 hands and if you said that it was so, well then, that makes it so! I think maybe folks have forgotten Paul Bunyon??
And by the way Texas ^_~ I understand from horses and farms and ranches myself (Okie here... stuck in Arizona, but still an Okie!).
Anyway, you just keep doing what you\'ve been doing and I\'m sure there are those of us that will keep reading it ^_~

I just wanted to say that I read your story and your Author\'s notes, and I enjoyed the story immensely and thoroughly agree with your replies to your reviewers. Reality is different to all and the idea that everyone should conform to one form of reality is as absurd as saying that everyone should conform to the same idea of God. So kudos to you for telling it as it is. I think that few people truly understand how difficult writing can be until they\'ve truly tried it (I have, and rarely come up with a good story). One of my very slight successes was when I was 15 and wrote a rather, ahem, racey story that I submitted to class. I was truly frightened that my teacher would disapprove (due to the sex scenes in it) but to my delight she handed it back to me with an \"A\". I let a male friend of mine read it and he was stunned (by my apparent accuracy of those same scenes considering I had NO experience with the subject, lol). However, since that time, my \"attempts\" at writing have fallen extremely short of what I had hoped they\'d be. So I rarely write now. Anyway, don\'t let these people\'s comments disuade you. You write well, and with accuracy and should keep up your storytelling!

Iloved it! can you please write more,you did a great job you can be proud

Hey.. You left poor Remus hanging! T_T Nice story though. I enjoyed it, though it could have done with a bit more plot and a bit more longer. Other than that, very nicely done!

I loved your story and thought there might be more, only to find author\'s notes. Your notes saddened me. I can\'t see why anyone would leave you a negative review. Don\'t be discouraged by them, this is coming from someone who discourages easily at negative criticism. Eveyone has an opinion, and in my opinion it was a lovely story. I say this as a fellow ss/hg fanfic author, (I\'ve done two novel length fics and a few shorter ones) LOL.
I\'m part Native American, but I\'m from the Northeast (New England); and I\'ve never seen a horse except the Clydesdales at the brewery in my hometown.
ellen

No offense taken. I was just trying to point out some things that jarred me out of the story. Half the time when I run into the local California Miwoks, I don\'t even know it, and I was speaking from my experience... that\'s the mundane/muggle experience I\'m part of. You have a more personal awareness of Indian culture than I do... that\'s fine, let it show... it\'ll make the story all the better. But... in stories with Hermione, they make the distinctions between the two worlds... you were making it seem (to me) like the \"Dances With Wolves\" sorta world was still the fact, in the American muggle world.

And as for the Horses... again, I read a lot about them, but you own some... great... at least don\'t say horse-Severus is 20hs and just skate on like it\'s normal... =) And most odd critters in the HP are magical animals... but horses are something a reader can reality check... make it an magical breed, or a half-breed, like Crooks... Half Giant-steed or something... You see what I mean?

Anyway, I reviewed it when I did cuz I just found it. =) If I hadn\'t of liked it, you wouldn\'t have known it, because I wouldn\'t have reviewed at all. So don\'t stop writing... it only gets better when you keep working it.