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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I don\'t mind criticism, it would be helpful if you could leave a comment as to why it\'s pedantic drivel, so I can improve my writing in the future.
Much obliged.
Much obliged.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S. You DO realize that the word \"pedantic\" would sorta contradict that \"6th grade girl\" insult, right?
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What exactly did Severus do?
But great chapter and i look forward to the next one!
But great chapter and i look forward to the next one!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is getting good and can wait to see what happens next.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like you story i cant wait in till you update next sooo please update soon ..
thank you and later
angel
thank you and later
angel
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! It\'s so amusing!!! and the Snape and Hermione story is rather romantic as well! I loved the dumbledore comment, \"He\'s compleately whipped!\" had me in hysterics!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. Suggestions eh? Hmmm... well revenge on Severus is a must if he actually confesses to Hermione. I think the use of some Weasley gag products are a must. A potion to make the men do something terribly silly would be good. YMCA or something as particularly odd. Maybe have a prank that causes what the target to sing their responses. Or better yet, polyjuice the men into someone else (have Dobby help administer the potions with a breakfast). :) Hope this jogs your inner muse.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Any advice? Smut always works. Always. lolol
~Ailo
~Ailo
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is sooooo amazing!! write more please, and fast!