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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good, but on the 'No Place Like Home' spell, is'nt it supposed to be three clicks of the heel? I think you shuold watch 'The Wizard of Oz' again sometime soon. Other than that, this is a very good read.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the story. a very funny relaxed story....i think that you should write a prequel of sorts to show HOW snape ever fell in love with hermione in her 7th year......the only thing i have to complain about is that the characters are all OOC....but ohter than that, great story!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Review Chapter 2....
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Over? Come on! How about a final prank at the staff meeting?
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Light and funny. I alway knew he was a softy underneath!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are absolutely correct. I have looked up pedantic at Webster\'s and my recall of the words meaning is not precisly what I thought it was. Thank you for that oversight in my memory. I went to the thesaurus, and have decided that \"puerile \" would be an excellent replacement word.
Also, as far as giving specific editorial type feedback as to why I didn\'t like the story, I tend not to do that any more. Such time and investment is generally not worth it, and is ignored just as much as pithy statements (minus embarrassing wrong word usage) stating my dislike. Hey, at least I don\'t just write \"This story sucks!\". Be content in the fact that you have plenty of reviews that tell you how wonderful you are, and relegate my review to the pile the holds the unexplainable anomilies that occur in life.
Also, as far as giving specific editorial type feedback as to why I didn\'t like the story, I tend not to do that any more. Such time and investment is generally not worth it, and is ignored just as much as pithy statements (minus embarrassing wrong word usage) stating my dislike. Hey, at least I don\'t just write \"This story sucks!\". Be content in the fact that you have plenty of reviews that tell you how wonderful you are, and relegate my review to the pile the holds the unexplainable anomilies that occur in life.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do appreciate the effort it took you to write a bit more than \"This story sucks!\"
You review just made my day better (And I\'m serious). Thank you!
You review just made my day better (And I\'m serious). Thank you!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t realize they let 6th grade girls post stories here? What a load of pedantic drivel.