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That was utterly beautiful. Well written, excellent pov and it just exuded so much raw emotion.

You werite very well. You should have gotten more reviews. Just because there was no descriptive smut <.< ppl are weird. This fic is gorgeous the way it is.

An excellent fic, though I wish there had been a little less \"telling\" and more \"showing.\" It\'s more effective in storytelling to show a character\'s rage through their actions and throughts than to say, \"He was angry.\" Still, the little details of everyday life you included go a long way towards remedying this problem. Are you going to write another chapter? It isn\'t necessary, but I would love to read it.

Wow, this is so beautiful. Your writing is so incredibly beutiful. So far, this story is my favorite.

Holy moly! Did he come home to die? He finally tells Draco he loves him and Draco knows they are going to die. I can\'t wait for chapter 2!

this is an awesome story!