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Next chapter is alraedy written and it does have incest in it, sorry. :(
I\'ll try to put less incest in after that and bring in some other characters left in the dorms over xmas.

About the beta, any volunteers

Mojo

ooooh please hurry on this one. this seems really good and i cant wait!

Realy good.... but you need a beta.

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Chapter 4:

Okay, I liked that it was longer, but honestly, I\'m not into the whole incest thing. It\'s just creepy.

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Chapter 3:

I like your story, though the chapters are a little too short for my liking. I think I little more detail should help out that problem.

So are you taking requests about who I think the girls should be dreaming about? If you are, I would like to see Hermione with someone we wouldn\'t think of, a rare pairing, if you will. With Ginny, I would like the opposite, I would like to see something canon, maybe pair her Dean Thomas? *shrugs* Just a thought.

And are we going to see any of the older students? Like with Ron\'s brothers? Maybe like Fred and Angelina or Percy and Penelope (and/or Marcus)?

Or maybe even with the staff memebers. I\'ve always like the idea of Snape and Madam Pomfrey.

Okay, let me stop, this is your story. You write, I\'ll read. . . and review if I don\'t forget. =)

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All i can say is \"Nice\"
Keep it up, but perhaps you could have a guy sneak in? ;)

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Chapter 1:

I love the way, you kept Hermione in character. I like how you had her teaching Ginny what do to. I guess once a know-it-all, always a know-it-all. Though I am curious, will Hermione ever live out her other fantasies?

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read the an for teh second chapter i just uploaded and let me know waht you want. :)

Mojo