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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You actually brought tears to my eyes with this one. Doesn\'t seem fair that some people make all the sacrifices, and those that benefit rarely notice or care.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I enjoyed the overall plot of the story, the beginning was pretty slow and the end was really rushed. If you had balanced out the two halves, you would have had a wonderful fic because your writing and ideas are great, just the flow wasn\'t.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo sad! you actually made me cry at the end! I could start crying again just thinking about it! Why do most Angelina/Montague fics have to end so tragic???
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, this is the saddest, most heart-felt story I have ever read in any FF, and, come to think of it, it\'s hard to think of any book this sad. Even Romeo and Juliet was silly (met and died within three days).
I\'m going through something similar, staying with someone I\'m not entirely sure I love, and it scares me. The fear of never finding the love I\'m meant to have.
I\'m going through something similar, staying with someone I\'m not entirely sure I love, and it scares me. The fear of never finding the love I\'m meant to have.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs* That was so sad. I never got pass the first chapter of this fic before because I thought it was an Angelina/George fic. Anyway, loved the A/M tragedy.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like the Brits say, bloody brilliant story! One of the best fanfics I\'ve read in a long time.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story..especially the build up to the end. Although because the twins are my favourite characters I was a little miffed at first thinking that Fred had hurt Angelina. I was thoughtly convinced that he was the cause of the bruises and such, you did a great job of covering all the bases and making it tense enough to make one scream. I cried at the end, so good job! :D
That was definatly my first time reading something so heart wrenching.
That was definatly my first time reading something so heart wrenching.