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I am loving your work more every time I read it

WEEE!! When I saw you had posted I squealed so loud I scared my cat. I love your story. My only complaint is you don\'t update enough...which I totally understand, so please don\'t think I mean that nastily. I was cautious at first, mainly because I adore Lily, and I usually like Hermione, but I love the way you\'ve built this story, all the twists. I have two questions, which you might have answered in the text of the story, so if you have I\'m sorry for reasking: 1) Exactly how old would Harry be then? and 2) Where did he and Draco get Elvish blood? Is that an add-on to the bonding? Orrrrrr? Anyway, THANKS and I hope you have time to update again soon!

Update! Update! Update!
PLEEEEASE? :-)

This is a great story I can\'t wait to see where all those doors lead to intheir quarters. I am a bit disappionted that the headmaster has lied to Harry and to the wizarding world. Update soon this is really good. So are your other stories.

This is a great story please write more soon!!!

This is becoming one of my favorite HP stories. Interesting premise and excellent development. I especially like the way you have handled the sexual relationship - a little awkward, a little fear, a little lust. I get tired sometimes of stories where the characters just fall into bed with each other so quickly and simply, especially if they\'re virgins. I\'d love to see a mutually respecting sovereign/subject relationship develop between Harry and Severus. I\'d also love to see Lucius\' reaction when he finds out 1) that the bond was transformed and 2) that the boys are staying in Salazar\'s rooms. Will he try to come see Harry and his son? Looking forward to more.

omg, thats such an awsome story !! must have more

really good story. I really love that each chapter is about the same lenght and boy is it long. keep up the good work, update soon!

i dont know about anyone ese but i thought that you made harry and Draco\'s love making a little to technical. I didn\'t get the feeling that Drao actually wanted it, it felt more like a nessecity. And they didn\'t really show if they were enjoying themselves or not, didn\'t lose control like you do when your in love. There was no spark. But i love your story thank you for updating.

I really love your story, it is one of my favorites, but I\'m extremely confused about Harry\'s parentage. I understand the whole \'time capsule\' thing and that he is the child of two of the male founders but which one is his father and which is his \'mother\' I don\'t understand. I\'ve looked through the story and found 3 different quotes regarding this and they seem to contradict or maybe I don\'t properly understand their meaning but to me \"out of\" means the baby exited that person making that person the \'mother\' or \'carrier\'... and really... if Harry already knows that he is the progeny of two males why was he so concerned about a male pregnancy potion? I would think it rather obvious that male pregnancy or at least reproduction between two males is not only possible but proven by Harry\'s own existence... NEway please continue your wonderful story and I leave you with your own quotes:

He was their child - Salazar Slytherin\'s child, out of Godric Gryffindor. (ch. 7 Honour Bound)

Draco shrugged - only partially successfully, since he was laying on one shoulder. \"If he\'s your... You know,\" he said, going off on a tangent, \"you\'d think that as long as wizards have been able to have children without witches, we\'d have come up with a separate word for a male child bearer. Anyway, if Slytherin was your - mother - you have every right to it.\" (ch. 10 Honour Bound)

\"He\'s Salazar\'s son, out of Godric Gryffindor,\" Draco inserted, when he saw - and felt - how reluctant Harry was to say the words. (ch. 14 Honour Bound)