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for Honour Bound

by Draeconin

schedule September 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story, thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing your ideas. I will eventually get to your original stories, and I can't wait. But it will have to wait for now because of real life stuff.
person minieegold
schedule May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I love Harry in the Slytherin house. Thank you for this lovely chapter 💕
person minieegold
schedule May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I love top!Harry ^^
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really loved this story. It was well written and really intriguing. I couldn't stop reading it.
person Flaimdra
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your answer @ Lifejournal
i've just reed Honour bound and light of heaven and im posting both reviews here

to honour Bound
I have to say that at some point i realy hated Hermine for what she was doing
i mean wasn't she supposed to be the "Brain"
how could she forget what is going to happen to Dray if she transfers the bound to herself
but fortunately Lorienne helped (did I spell her name right?)
anyway the story is very logical and also in my opinion wonderfull defined and worked out
refering to the situation the acting of the Caras where all "in Character"
and I personaly lofe Harry/Dray Parrings if you have more storys like this i'm going to reed em through too as soon as your site is available again


to Light of Heaven

I've reed a quite similar Story in german
it was the first H/D story I've ever reed and it started my lusting after that paring
it was called "Und dann kamst du"
and the first few chapters where realy similar (realy realy similar)
@ first I Thought yours is a plagiat (cause I've reed the other one first) bir there where very much Differences and I think after chap 5 the storyline was going a compleatly different way
anywayafter the first Irritation I absolutly adored the thought of them being both Veelas
usualy only one of them is one
i also liked the Dragons and theyr way of thinking (even thou they made Dray break down)
i loved it that they helped them gain power to get their Rights in teh Veela-comunity
I also would have liked it to hear (or rather reed) more about their children (this referes to all of your storys)


would you mind writing a story in which the children have a more Active role (like how they spend the first 3-4 Years in the family)
this is only a "POLITE REQUEST" (I personaly would dye to reed more such stories but there are so few of them)

anyway i hope my Rev is OK for you (I'm not writiong often revs so i'm not very good @ them)
CU
Fla
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story but that really sucked the way that you left it...no real ending to all of the things that were going on aside from Harry and Draco's relationship...What about Dumbledore or Ron or how things end up with Voldemort????
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting story. I don't think I've seen the whole Harry as Slytherin/Gryffindor's *actual* son done before. I'm disappointed there won't be a sequel, but the only thing that really bothers me is *what happened to Godric and Salazar*?? You hinted that Lilorien knew, but you never said!
person Rishinti
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this is one of the best fan fics I have read. I had to come back and re-read it after a few months. You have the ability to capture the reader. I like how you developed Harry and Draco, how you made them real, for lack of a better word. You are a great writer. If you do ever decide to write sequel please let me know. Thank you for your time and the great story.
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!! no sequel??? Wait you can't do this to your fans *wails* T_T. Anyway, this fic is awesome; i particularly love how things started from forced to heart-felt for harry and draco. Also, the fact that harry fights back is so awesome (the old coot deserves that for being a manipulative git :D). I've read your other stories and they're great as well: i hope you'll write more in the future. Ja ne.
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. Thanks for sharing it.
K.