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for My Own

by Jemixe

person sbkar
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gratuitous ride ~~ Did you mean \"gracious\" ride? As in the offer
from Draco was gracious?

Definitions of gratuitous on the Web:

* without cause; \"a gratuitous insult\"
* complimentary: costing nothing; \"complimentary tickets\"
* unnecessary and unwarranted; \"a strikers\' tent camp...was burned with needless
loss of life\"
www.cogsci.princeton.edu/cgi-bin/webwn2.1

* a) unnecessary b) grateful c) lucky
www.iavalley.cc.ia.us/EN101/Carter%20Vocabulary.htm


Definitions of gracious on the Web:

* characterized by charm, good taste, and generosity of spirit;
\"gracious even to unexpected visitors\"; \"gracious living\"; \"he bears
insult with gracious good humor\"
* beneficent: doing or producing good
* benignant: characterized by kindness and warm courtesy especially of a
king to his subjects; \"our benignant king\"
* courteous: exhibiting courtesy and politeness; \"a nice gesture\"
* disposed to bestow favors; \"thanks to the gracious gods\"
www.cogsci.princeton.edu/cgi-bin/webwn2.1

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Thank you so very much for updating!!!!!! <dictionaries in the air to juggle!!!>> I got caught in the first two chapters
and have been waiting ever-so-impatiently for more!!!!

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person Alexa
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good but very short... Please post more sooner and if possible - longer.
person niamh
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg please update!! i luv luv luv vampire!draco stories!!!
person Yana
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahhaha Harry i think u should go, before Draco jumps on you
person Morningstar
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I love how you made Harry. He seems really confident of himself and almost bored with the antics of vampires. Definitly caught my attention. Please put up another chapter soon.
person LPhoenix
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m soo excited for the next chappie! update soon!
person Alexa
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very intriguing. And well written.
I want more! :-)
person Demon
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I CAN\'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE! update now.
person Shame Ness
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so confused. This is not like in the summary, your confusing me. Please explian, though sex is written quite well. Just much confusion has entered my mind!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was confused at first. Then I realized you were going to tell this story from the memories! I can\'t wait for chapter 2!