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for Revenge of Harry Potter!!!!

by Asher

person Staple Kitten
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was boring to me. Good consept. I like the idea. You need more gore and emotion. I hope you write more cause this was kind of disapointing. . . So in next chapters kick ass!
*Peace*Love*Happiness* Lots of luck and sexxxy yaoi kisses!
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!! AND IT\'S THE LONGEST CHAPTER YET, I NOTICED THEY\'RE GETTING LONGER AND LONGER.....YAY!!!!

MORE BLOOD!

MORE GUTS!!!

MORE TOM AND HARRY LOVE!!!!

MORE DAMN YOU WIND OR I\'LL HAVE TO BURN YOU!!!!!

FLAME
person Irihi Safaia
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* awesome. More soon please! *cheers* Yay for Dark!Harry! And yay for Fun!Tom!
person Earendel
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry blasts Dubledoor.
person tessa3
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* 2 words.....Holy Shit

*blinks* longer sentence..... well i just like to say... MORE MORE..a dark harry is always a happy harry ^_^
person Ice
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am the Ice, the freezer and preserver of justice. (thought I\'d try something new)

Get progressively worse? I can\'t wait to see the 10th chapter then! Wow... er... reading now.

MuggleSkin? Sounds like a rare find, but we know it\'s really... Hey, I want a MuggleSkin briefcase, in fact, a particular MuggleSkin...

Harry
person BakaNeko
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, sounds like fun! I like it!

Keep it up! MORE BLOOD!
person Irihi Safaia
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm! more! *giggles*
person ice owl
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is the trouble with amateurs... Here is what Harry really wanted for his birthday
1. A pigskin travelling case made from Vernon\'s hide
2. A new journal made from a pet horse
3. A whale blubber lamp complete with several months whale blubber.
See these gifts are much more useful and decorative than a box with eyes and ears in it.
person LilianKnight
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, would like to see were this story goes. so far not bad ^__^