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June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nothing particularly wrong about it... other than the books clearly state Luna has grey eyes. I honestly can't recall what color eyes the actress had, but I personally usually default to books (unless there's something I specifically prefer in the movies).
An interesting match: Remus and Luna. I think I would be interested in more. Perhaps something a shade or two longer or with more buildup. In this story a little more into Remus' change of mind in responding to Luna's ad might be nice.
Otherwise I found it very cute and gently charming. I always enjoy when Remus finds happiness, and I think Luna could be a worthy candidate in giving happiness to anyone whom she deems worthy in the right circumstances. You certainly made one, though I could see her accepting Remus without having been infected herself. She's just that accepting.
Thanks for writing.
An interesting match: Remus and Luna. I think I would be interested in more. Perhaps something a shade or two longer or with more buildup. In this story a little more into Remus' change of mind in responding to Luna's ad might be nice.
Otherwise I found it very cute and gently charming. I always enjoy when Remus finds happiness, and I think Luna could be a worthy candidate in giving happiness to anyone whom she deems worthy in the right circumstances. You certainly made one, though I could see her accepting Remus without having been infected herself. She's just that accepting.
Thanks for writing.