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for Ten Years

by slygriff21

person lovethelab
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO HERMIONE GO HERMIONE! Can\'t wait til your next chapter!
person Stratyllis
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your grammar still needs some work. Thanks for being upfront about Snape being OOC, now I think you need to own up to the fact that everyone in your fic is OOC. Drake? Please. You really are improving though. This fic is much better then some of your earlier ones. Keep writing and getting better. I look forward to reading more.
person Anijade
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh I like this keep writing you have me hooked already!
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was so sweet. I loved Hermione sticking up for Severus that way. That was great.
person June
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - good, I\'m glad Hermione was open enough to tell Severus of her feelings for him. But what is up with Harry and the bimbo?? THanks for updating!
person Miari
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! Beautifully done! MORE MORE MORE! Pretty please?
person Miari
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, WHAT is with Harry? Why is he treating his old friends like excrement? What\'s up with his wife and why do Hermione, Draco, and Ron loathe her? Will Hermione or Severus be the one to make the first move?
person lemonade
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! He\'s got a whole lot of kissing up to do to make up for that!!! Have fun making him crawl!! ;)
person June
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - What! You begin a brand new story, and with the very first chapter you leave us on a cliffhanger! You better be writing Chapter 2 right now!! And what\'s up with rude Harry and this Kelly? Has she bewitched him against his old friends? Looking forward to the next chapter.