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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I like the making of these two orphans as officially family. You explained it all very nicely. Hmmmmm....do we get the wedding and the wedding night next? Cheers! ~Ginny
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brillant story, can\'t wait till the next chapter
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BAH!!! you can\'t leave it there!!!!! that is just plain cruel!!!!
i sincerely hope that you update soon, cause i don\'t think that i\'ll be able to wait a extordinarily long time!!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!......pwease?
Aileen
i sincerely hope that you update soon, cause i don\'t think that i\'ll be able to wait a extordinarily long time!!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!......pwease?
Aileen
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude cliffhanger not nice, but the stroy is comming along nicely
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait in till the next chapter ..... whathappen i need to know so update soooon please and thank you i love how it is going ...well bye for now
angel
angel
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, please update soon?
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I like the cliffie at the end. So, are her parents dead? Awful lot of pressure on an 18 yr old...have to get married and have a child right away, I think that you are doing a fairly good job of showing her emotions as being overwhelmed. I\'ll keep following along. Cheers! ~Ginny
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The writing is not bad. There is absolutely no way Professor Dumbledore would let Harry Potter go to a muggle house with Voldemort on the loose. Harry would be dead as soon as he stepped off the platform. Harry is only safe at the Dursley\'s because of the blood magic that protects him. Sorry my imagination does not stretch that far.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow update it now. i really like it, if you leave a cliffy, you gotta give me the rest of it.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story and can\'t wait for the next update!