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for The Power Lies Within

by Hedwig8347

person Emma
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Great story! Update soon!
person Julianna
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I just finished reading the first 10 chapters and I\'m awaiting some more. Great story =D
person princess_zombie
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is absolutely brilliant! I love it. I liked the part where Hermione said it was okay to nibble. ;) Keep writing, you\'re quite good at it.
person Samantha
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great story. I can\'t wait to see what happens in chapter 10. Keep it going. Your story is really good.
person Catpower
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great and I can\'t wait for the wedding night! Also, I would really like to read about the ring Severus has chosen for Hermione. I liked the wedding ceremony with its pentacle and herbs and flowers. Sev\'s mother is completely different from any other fic I\'ve read and I suspect that she may be quite a powerful character for the newly-weds to deal with - could be interesting! Also, looking forward to Ron\'s reaction - teehee :)
person Olivia
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHH! More soo please!!!!!!!!! :)
person beeky63
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story and am faithfully following it. Looking forward to the lemons so hurry up and update.
(No pressure).
person pumkin
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. i\'m enjoying the story very much. keep up the good work.
person Starbridge
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! I\'m anxious to see what comes next. Keep up the good work! :)
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! I love how you have Snape\'s mother! I can\'t wait to read chapter 10! Please have it up and soon! Pretty please with sprinkles and a cherry on top!

Tiffany