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for Bane of My Existence

by DreamHowler

person Jan
schedule April 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I had hope there was some kind of miracle and Albus would be saved 😕 Can't wait for the final battle, please update chapter 13 soon.
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 please!!!!
person Nightallice
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What I'd like to tell you is that I like your story very much. I see that you thought your characters through and that you've done a lot of research to make this story good. Snape's way of speaking made me smile. You're one of the few authors, who can make him sound realistic. You have feelings for him, don't you? You made him look handsome, sing magnificently and produce good lyrics, besides of course, talents given by J.K. Rowling. One little thing more and you might overdo it ;) But that's just a thought of mine. Well, I think you lost Draco's character a little. In my opinion he's a bit too romantic and sweet and too little sarcastic, daring and malfoyish. I loved the scene, when Draco revealed himself to Harry. When he purred into Harry's ear... *purrs herself* Although I thought that Malfoy will actually do something, not just stare at Harry as he was leaving. Okay, but enough of this critic. I said I like your story and that means your Draco was bearable. :D
Well, I think I said everything I wanted. If I remember something, I'll add it, don't worry :P :D
I wish you a lot of inspiration ;)
Nightallice
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 10!!!
person SP777
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about the story...

I must admit I'm glad to see this story updated. Since the last time I left it [2 years ago it seems], it was stuck at #5, I think.

The one thing I like the most in this story is something not many authors do or
feel it might be out of place and that's using the idea of ''Prof. Snape is
using a glamour & is really handsome underneath''. I've always liked the idea and
wonder why I don't see it more, after all this IS fanfiction, so why not stretch
the imagination a little further.

Not to say it hasn't been done at all, but it's rare to see nowadays.

Anyway, can't wait to 'see' the next group performance.
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... You have just gained a new stalker. (By that I meant avid, rabid reader). Please Update at your soonest possible moment. Thank you for writing!!!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey coolz u updated since i last checked one of the few storys that i have that did ta it was gud
person Diania
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so, any chance i could possibly be notified via email when you update? i'm really liking this story, and i'd love to read it as it follows the plot through to completion. my email is nikkivip@hotmail.com thx!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 9!!! Blaise started his courtship! Hope it goes well!
person SParker
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
about chapter 2...

Oh..my...God!!! O_O

You mean to tell me there is someone out there that actually REMEMBERS the cartoon, Jem!?! You MUST be in your early 30's to have seen it back in the day or someone who happened to come across it.

...or is there some rock band out there calling themselves that??? O_o