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OMG AWESOME! please keep going

How sad for Draco. He deserves better then that!

Wow. Nice. Very interesting narrative style. At first it threw me off, but it really works for this scene. Loved the descriptive way you showed what was going on with no dialogue at all. And the last line was absolutly perfect! Thank you!

Ooh Harry, I love the twist. Beautifully written as always, I actually felt bad for Draco in the end... so sad, you could feel his yearning, love, loyalty, and the pain of distance as Harry walked away... gorgeous.

wow i dont like harry in this

Very disturbing end, but great line of story. Loved the little details of Draco\'s adoration and how he could give all of himself so freely and ask for nothing back. Harry\'s mind... well, it suits the darker side of him that\'s been lurking about for some time, doesn\'t it?

Sorry \'bout the babbling... just thought this was worth of a review, even though I\'m a horrible reviewer.