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by Dent

person hobbit
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I look forward to the next chapters. Good job, and keep up the good work.

-Selkie
person Amber
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you\'ve got me hooked. *shock* I love the ron/hermione pairing, but I can\'tt usually find any fiction that I would want to read. I want to read this! I loved every part, Percy\'s tone of voice in the letter (you\'ve got that down) and the argument between Hermoine and Ron. It was all great and I really look forward to reading more. *excited*
person slouchyduck
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
funny. and they are staying in character which i like. you spelled definitely wrong, but other than that, nothing but good things to say.