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for Childish

by MuirninMorrigan

person Taber
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the first chapter, can\'t wait for more.
person zebraspots05
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just one comment: Too Short! Love where this is going, please do continue
person sloth
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good. a little rough around the edges, but it is only the beginning. keep writing!