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for A Night at the Club

by KT502

person forge_underhill
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy freaks of nature!!! What did Snape in that vodka?!?!? Not that I mind really. Awesome 2nd chapter, I\'m so glad you finally updated and I can\'t wait for the next installment!!! Go you!!!
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn.... I\'m goin clubbin.
person angel
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg..... please update every every every sooooon please i really really like this story well in till next time

angel
person basketcase
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the \"not a morning person\" scene- it sounds really familiar:)
Keeping things interesting by not following through on a drunken date is a classy way to keep the readers interest.
More, please!
person \'Manda
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sighing she adjusted the temperature and proceeded with her shower.

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Several minutes later, she stepped out of her bathroom, wrapped in a light pink fluffy bathrobe with her wrapped in a pink towel turban.

There\'s a word missing in there.... ^
person \'Manda
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, you absolutly HAVE to write another chapter!!!!
person cearrae
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very funny stuff - I assume he gets into her knickers sooner or later. I\'ll come along for the ride.
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooo awesome!!! Just update soon! Great idea!
person forge_underhill
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Katie!!!! Oh why do you torture me so?
You have written an awesome first chapter with a highly evil cliffhanger and you dare now to not update? Why oh why are you so cruel to me?!?! Please please PLEASE update as soon as possible....this is driving me nuts!!!!
person Arabella
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Puh-lease don\'t stop there, I\'m begging you! It\'s great so far... don\'t stop.
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