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for Hidden In Time

by Jessica

person ............i.
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
crap..:)
person Danine
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did you say \"might be a Mary Sue\", because it already is. Not that there\'s anything wrong with posting a Mary Sue, because you fully admitted it might actually be one, and I\'ll have to applaud you on that part. However, the first chapter was very small and you might want to consider using a beta, or rereading what you\'ve written before it\'s posted. It didn\'t make much sense, I\'m sorry.
person Akai\'zhar
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh... Intresting story you just need to explain why she has silver hair, amber eyes and claws... ANd you really need help.. much more so than me ^_^ Luv ya hun!