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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!! Things will be different now! The malfoy self steem is back (kind of) and Harry will have a run for his money!! I\'m soooo happy that you updated! Your fic is fantastic! Amazingly PERFECT!! And super original!! Hugs!!
Ps: Thanks again for answering me!!
Ps: Thanks again for answering me!!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats awsome.. so good !
cant wait till u update
cant wait till u update
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my poor Draco! I hope he won\'t do anything completely stupid - like some love potion or someting like it.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update, and I mean now. This story is so good, and your writing is as well, save for the few typos that I saw. Just a few minor ones. UPDATE!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay...
sorry to impeed on your artistic image, but I just had a most pleasent chain of events play out in my head as to How the boys handle this that *might* work for you, and give our dearest Drakiepoo a break. If you\'re stuck (as I\'ve often been with one of my stories) and any alteration of it works for you, feel free to incorporate it as you see fit.
Harry now feels bad for putting Draco through what he had, as you\'ve made no push to turn him into one of the brooding, depressed and dark Harry\'s. As such, his Gryffindor conscience feels he has seriously wronged Draco, and decides that he needs to set it right. Thinking he can take any punishment (invisioning a beating, of course) Draco can dish out, he gives him a night\'s free reign, promising himself that after whatever pain he experiances, Draco and he\'ll be square. He offers, able to get the words out with only a slight cringe (outward, anyways). Draco, however, thinks this his big chance to be with Harry the way *he* wants to, which leads to a great deal of Harry\'s confusion as Draco just wants to kiss and cuddle, constantly waiting for the moment to snap and the beating (physical or sexual) to begin, going as far as finally pointing it out to Draco outloud when the oddness of the situation had bugged him too long.
From there, you can have Harry start to realize Draco really may have been telling the truth about the dreaded L-word, or you may have him push the experiance aside as something manipulative entirely...
anyway, just a thought. LadyE
sorry to impeed on your artistic image, but I just had a most pleasent chain of events play out in my head as to How the boys handle this that *might* work for you, and give our dearest Drakiepoo a break. If you\'re stuck (as I\'ve often been with one of my stories) and any alteration of it works for you, feel free to incorporate it as you see fit.
Harry now feels bad for putting Draco through what he had, as you\'ve made no push to turn him into one of the brooding, depressed and dark Harry\'s. As such, his Gryffindor conscience feels he has seriously wronged Draco, and decides that he needs to set it right. Thinking he can take any punishment (invisioning a beating, of course) Draco can dish out, he gives him a night\'s free reign, promising himself that after whatever pain he experiances, Draco and he\'ll be square. He offers, able to get the words out with only a slight cringe (outward, anyways). Draco, however, thinks this his big chance to be with Harry the way *he* wants to, which leads to a great deal of Harry\'s confusion as Draco just wants to kiss and cuddle, constantly waiting for the moment to snap and the beating (physical or sexual) to begin, going as far as finally pointing it out to Draco outloud when the oddness of the situation had bugged him too long.
From there, you can have Harry start to realize Draco really may have been telling the truth about the dreaded L-word, or you may have him push the experiance aside as something manipulative entirely...
anyway, just a thought. LadyE
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...
that was..
hiks...
what was Draco going to do....???
please stop torturing him!!!
that was..
hiks...
what was Draco going to do....???
please stop torturing him!!!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, I hope you update again soon. ^-^ Can\'t wait to see how this turns out.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Draco going to feed Harry a love portion? This is pathetic indeed. I guess we cannot blame him, but Draco is smarter than that. I hope that Draco
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 10! What is this plan? Will it succeed?
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome. *sniff* that was really cool! I can\'t wait for you to update. Is harry going to be nicer?