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for Kneeling

by Neery

person thrnbrooke
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does Draco give him another chance or walk away? I can\'t wait for chapter 13!
person RiTiNhA
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this fic an hour ago and I couldn\'t stop! Wow, a submissive Draco, very hot! I must say I simply LOVE angst but I prefer when is with Harry... you could try to put Harry breaking down on Draco (after all he is much stress and all that stuf..). Well, I only want to know if it will be a nice happy ending in this fic! I know, angst and drama are very good but I can\'t read a fic when they don\'t stay togheter in the end... please, tell me if it\'s going to be sad! =P Oh, and I want to say that I love the sex scenes but this last one was the greatest, because it had... care. I hope they talk and work up their relationship.... Please update soon and good luck in your writing! Sorry the bad english but I\'m portguese and I\'m still learning! ^_^\' ******
person Alexa
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! You updated! And so soon too! Fantastic! And the watcher - I can relate - who wouldn\'t want to see what happens next in such a story... :-)
I can\'t wait to see how things will go from here!
And you nailed the point on Harry feeling entitled, and how it relates to Tom. Cool!
person Fate takes no prisoners
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my that after glow scene is too cute please keep going this is my favorite pairing and this is a really cute story. (I can\'t wait to see who the mysterious mastermind is.)
person Dezra
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know this is a spell on Draco\'s part, but I hope they get together anyhow. I love Draco. Harry seems to be coming around slowly.
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love when my imagination follows the author\'s plot. Your transition proved far more believeable than the one my imagination had come up with. Kudos! OH, and I liked the whole \"am I evil now?\" bit... very nice.
Now I\'ll just have to sit and see how well Harry will accept this new eqality in their relationship, and how poor Draco will react when he finds out HE was under the potion. Oh, that\'ll be a fun chapter to write, no doubt...
The mystery guy ( who I have an inkling is either Sev or one of Draco\'s dorm mates) stopps, figuring the horror Draco experiances once he returns to his correct mindset would have to satisfy him as the potion bit backfired bigtime
The shock Harry gets when he wakes with Draco snuggling with him (maybe wakes due to morning fondling by our blonde beauty, even?)
I\'ll stop talking now. Anyway, awaiting update.
LadyE
person Alexa
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one was great! How Draco finally decided to take his life back... I feel so... proud of him, and so glad!
And I can\'t wait to see how it plays out. I wish him the best of luck! And that he at the very least sucseeds in controling his actions and in getting back his self-respect. And maybe then - the respect of Harry, and Harry\'s recognition that he\'s a human being...
Thank you again for this story - it\'s a joy.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And it would serve Harry right for Draco to walk away. But in Harry\'s defense he doesn\'t know what love is. He doesn\'t understand what Draco has been giving him. Can\'t wait for chapter 11!
person omizu
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nnnnuuuuhhh he\'s not allowed to get over harry. Harry must grovel!! and then they should make up and and have hot make up sex T__T
person Fefs
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Semira, you\'re killing me!!!! I was crazy here wanting to see the scene where Draco end up the affair and Harry starts seeing his feelings!! But this chapter is gorgeous.. Draco\'s mind telling him that what he want is wrong.. Lucius attitude! I loved it! Hugs!