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great story. I love it. I am glad that you have updated it and I look forward to the next chapter.

Good development in their relationship, some care for Draco - it\'s wonderful, he deserves it. I\'m looking forward to next chapters. I love your story.

U have updated:) Brilliant:) WoW :) Wonderful:)
U can\'t imagine how happy I am to see you write again:)
Uh I am so angry at mysefl now, I knew I should written that rewiev nr.100 - well , it doesn\'t matter;) You have updated yay:)
Oh, have you ever read something written by jennawere she is putting her stories on skyehawke.com - and she is brilliant:) And she likes sud!Draco too;)
U should really read her Veela Enigma you will be amazed:) Thanks for update:) Happy Halloween:)

Is Harry falling in love with Draco? I hope so.

What happened to the man who was the reason fo all this mess?
Has he given up?

I did not quite get it what happened to Harry at the very end of the chapter. Did he stumble and fall?

Surprises, indeed! I liked this chapter, it was sweet and nice. Nothing too sad or painful. :)
Keep up the lovely work! ^_^

Ok, I\'ve just finished all 15 chapters. GREAT story! I love it! I like how you are going back and forth between the two of them, drawing our their characterizations. You are writing them so well, their personalities are quite vivid. And I\'m so glad that Harry came to his senses and stop using Draco so terribly--now it is good for both of them. I wonder how Lupin is doing though, and how he got so badly hurt (I know it was Lucius, but WHAT happened?). And the research Hermione was doing--what was it for? Is she done with it? I\'m so curious as to what is going on behind the scenes because i just KNOW that it is going to jump out suddenly and bite Harry and Draco on the ass. But I hope their relationship survives whatever bad stuff happens--and of course that includes when Draco is no longer taking the love potion (however that happens--Draco discovers it or the mysterious bad guy stops giving it to him). Please let him and Harry work it out--I hope this isn\'t one of those fics with a horribly sad ending where Harry and Draco don\'t end up at all happy. that would make me sad. :( The sex scenes are good, but if you wanted to add a little more detail, I don\'t think anyone would mind. have they kissed yet?
I\'ve only seen a couple of minor errors--in the middle of ch 14--it says draco looked at harry with disbelieve when harry mentioned his family hated him. it should be disbelief. and commas go inside the quotation marks like this: \"Gee, this story is great,\" not \"Gee, this story is great\",
FANTASTIC FIC and i really really hope you update soon!

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 15! Why did Draco do it? Harry hurt his back?

Yeah for you! Glad you updated, this is one of my favorite fics, because I think both characters are so in character. Kinda curious about who the mysterious man is and if Draco is still under the potion or not. Oooo now poor harry is injured. hope you update more soon.

hot chapter--pushing harry up against the tree like that! you are a good writer--i havent noticed any mistakes--thank! for that. makes it so much more enjoyable to read!