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Yea! I\'m enjoying your story, and looking forward to more!

quite interesting idea.... just who is the guy seeking revenge? O_O more please!

Poor Draco! Who is doing this? What does Draco really feel about Harry? Poor Harry is so confued. He doesn\'t know why this happened. Can\'t wait for chapter 4!

This is quite well written and contains a most intriguing plot locus. I would be interested in reading more.

The only point of contention I have, though, is the formatting. It is quite difficult to separate one paragraph from the other when they are all crushed together. I would reccomend that you put a paragraph break between each paragraph so that they are cleary demarcated from one another. If you hit [enter] an extra time after finishing a paragraph this website should note that automatically. Also html codes can be used:

before the paragraph and

after the paragraph.

Otherwise, wonderful job!

Please don\'t make it fluffy too soon. Please. Once each desides that he is gay and in love with the other, the story is as good as over, everything is cleas and it\'s only a question of overcoming danger from the outside, which they always do (thank God).
There is so much more interesting and angsty stuff that can happen before that... Please.
Thanks and keep posting!

Nice chapie. So, Harry is gay and attracted to Draco physically.
This is some start. There is a hope for Draco yet then.

Is Draco gay when not under the potion?
How is he holding meanwhile?

Update soon!

Well...no real remorse on Harrys part is their?? Not sorry or anything. Shame really. I liked the chapter though...if you could just make them a tinsy bit longer though?? i was dont with it in like 2-5 minuets.

I didn\'t understand who is this man.. please tell me? Is not lucius, right? And Draco really loves harry, right? I\'m kinda of sick and lazy right now... Please tell me? my e-mail is fefysss@hotmail.com
I\'ll be trully thankfull cause i really love this fic even don\'t understanding so well sometimes.. English is not my natural language so bare with me.. And i\'m sick!! Sore body and everything... Hugs! You are a trully good author!

Love it !
So interesting!
Keep posting please!
(And if at all possible - make it a happy end? But not right now.)
Thanks!

Who is this mystery evil man? Somebody not too smart apparently. Why does he think that Draco will tell his fatehr about Harry?

I hope Harry will feel guilty in the marning when he sees bruised Draco.