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Wow, what a paradox...how shall you sort the two of them out? When is Harry going to notice that Draco is supposed to be under a spell but isn\'t? Write more soon, yes?

Seems Draco is addicted to Harry\'s taste and Harry. Well .... the vote is still out. Can\'t wait for chapter 5!

You know, I just re-read the first chapter, and it seems that Harry, espesially drunk Harry, likes a submissive partner. Moreover, if one gets hard from fighting and seeing blood, than it\'s not just about power and domination, it\'s also about pain. The sober Harry is still in denial, he is after all supposed to be \"good\", but now that a willing and submissive partner is available, will Harry\'s tendensies slowly surface? That would be an interesting process of self-discovery. It would be hard for the \"Savior\" to admit what he likes, it would take time, and be so interesting psychologically...
Mmmm... I just can\'t wait for the rest of the story. You write the characters so well.
Oh, and what will happen to Draco when the potion supply ends... How will he react? He will have to re-evaluate so much in himself... And considering that the potion forces very strong emotion, and that probably contributes to making him so submissive, when the effect end,s maybe won\'t be so submissive, and would want something else.... How will that work? How will he reconsiliate his normal self with what he has been while the potion lased? Oh, soooo interesting!
I\'m looking forward to discovering the answers as you develop the story! This is so much fun! Thanks again.

mmmmm delicious, this story reallly intrigues me as to whats going to happen next, usually i can predict whats going to happen (not always a bad thing) but with your i can\'t! which is very refreshing and pleasing.
Great work (the smut scenes are to die for!) ^_^

Uuu... interesting... Cool chapter.
I love how you take the time to develop the relationship. So refreshing! (And thanks for the reply!)
More!!! :-)

Oh, also I like how you construct Harry\'s character - it\'s very round, and not too simple and shallow (not just the perfect \"griffindor\").
I\'m looking forward to meeting the complex Draco.

I am loving you fic and the way you are showing thing happening. Thanks for replying my review, i was really confused when i read it the first time, but then i read it again and everything made sance.. With your explanation i can say i\'m not confused anymore!! I already know this fic better then you, i think!! Just kiding.. and of course you know that..
Well, i loved this chapter!! Harry was really harry asking Draco to forgive him and healing his mouth. Oh.. and i loved the way you started showing us Harry\'s denial... calling Draco sexy and thinking he couldn\'t love him... so cool!!
I can\'t even start about Draco begging to give Harry another blowjob.. That was so hooooot.. Draco begging on his knees.. *fefs day dreaming* Er.. yeah... HOT!! Please update soon, ok? Poor Draco.. falling in love with someone that will make him cry a lot before his feelings change too.. Hugs!!

promising start!! i can\'t wait to read more, up date soon!

please update soon!!!!!!!!1

This is very good i hope you write a lot more :]