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for Kneeling

by Neery

person ...
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come now... don\'t tell me you\'re ditching the fic!

person Elizabeth SPiegel
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY GREAT GREAT GREAT, can\'t wait to read more! I wanna know who\'s the guy getting revenge on Draco? And everything else....please update soon!
person Sarryn
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful and extremely hot chapter. I cannot hold back my eagerness for more.

Much easier to read! Thank you!
person ura
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, forgot to mention. I am very glad that Harry was so careful with Draco while being intimate with him.
person Fefs
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. what a sexy chapter.. soo hot!! Poor Draco.. this potion got him bad! He is desperate to have anything from harry!! I love the way you are showing us their emotions!! really good!! I hope harry falls in love with Draco too.. This blond is just too cute on this fic... So loving... Well, please update soon again, ok?? This is only getting better everytime i see another chapter!! Hugs and congratulations!!
person kenzi
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.. this is very original, still kinda difficult for me to get used to the idea that its Draco with the love and Harry with the lust.. but its very original and very well written.. cant wait for more!
person ura
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Who is the mystery man? Could it be Snape?
person Alexa
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yey! Another chapter!
Cool, I liked how you did Draco\'s point of view. And the whole thing was very... honest I guess. More real.
But what do you mean - making the effects irreversible? Oh my! I don\'t know if I like it or not. Ok, not. But it is your story, so you deside.
Thanks fot the responce - I\'m glad I didn\'t guess it all - I like surprises.
Hope your cought gets better. :-)

You know, I tried for the first time to write something of my own - could you read it and review? Would be nice to get imput. It\'s called \"Love by Numbers\".

P.S.: By the way, you might want to change \"floor\" into \"ground\" in the text.
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! Harry couldn\'t be arsed to undress? Not even take off his pants? Kept his eyes closed? Draco deserves so much better! And just who is this man? It\'s driving me crazy! Can\'t wait for chapter 6!
person ice owl
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! You have such a sweet vulnerable guy here that I just want to scream at Harry to shut up and give him all the love and comfort that he needs.