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by Neery

person Alexa
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I\'m scared! Oh God! Someone help poor Draco!
I have to ask - will this be a happy end? Even if it takes a long time, just tell me, so that I can keep reading.
person Neery
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexa, I don\'t want to spoil it for the people who enjoy the uncertainty, so I\'m not going to answer on the review page, but if you really want to know if there\'s going to be a happy end, I\'ve sent you an e-mail.
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! PLEASE!
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is Draco doing this? Did Lucius do that to Remus or did he help him? Harry\'s about to do something really really stupid isn\'t he? He\'s going to really hurt Draco.... Can\'t wait for chapter 8!
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for chapter 7! At least he isn\'t in deniel....
person adrianpukeface
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm interesting... i think harry should start feeling a little sorrier for malfoy though. when will he find out about the potion? keep updating!
person Neery
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, I\'m still planning to finish it. Real Life just got very busy for a while and didn\'t leave me much time for writing. New parts coming up as soon as I can manage it.
person Alexa
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a question:
In the second chapter the mistery man thought: \"A pity - he had hoped Draco would contact his father right away. This meant he would have to make another batch of the potion, to make sure the spell didn
person Semira
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you\'re right, that seems to be a bit of a paradox, I\'d probably better go back and add some sentences to clarify - the love spell effect of the potion wears off, so if Draco doesn\'t take it for some time he won\'t be made to love Harry anymore. However, the indirect effects - allowing Harry to humiliate him, the risk of getting caught, all that - will of course add up, and the longer he is under the spell, the more havoc it will wreak on his life.